Mechanics
This is the down and gritty section where I get to describe word choice, grammar, and more. Oh, and rant about using proper spelling several hundred times. Scary? I think so...
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A brief lesson in how grammar can be made so that it drives the story.
More on semicolons and how they're used.
Periods, Semicolons, and Dashes
When should you use periods, semicolons, and dashes? A look into how the different puncuation affects the readers' thoughts.
I don't care how good you are, but if you use bad spelling and don't correct it...
Beginning writers will think this is boring -- advanced writers will love this. Basically? What can you use besides the word "said" and how can you use it to your maximum advantage?
Fixing False Enthusiasm and Weak Description
Beginners will love this critique, more advanced writers will benefit from it. It's an introduction of what kinds of techniques you do not want to use to lull a reader into your story.
Dialogue grammar is one of the most common mistakes for writers today. Here are some correct examples of how you use dialogue grammar.